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On Seeing the 100% Perfect Girl One Beautiful April Morning
By Haruki Murakami
translated by Jay Rubin

One beautiful April morning, on a narrow side street in Tokyo's fashionable Harajuku neighborhood, I walk past the 100% girl.

Tell you the truth, she's not that good-looking. She doesn't stand out in any way. Her clothes are nothing special. The back of her hair is still bent out of shape from sleep. She isn't young either -- must be near thirty, not even close to a "girl". But I still know from fifty yards away: She's the 100% perfect girl for me. The moment I see her, there's a rumbling in my chest, and my mouth is dry as a desert.

Maybe you have your own particular favorite type of girl -- one with slim ankles, say, or big eyes, or graceful fingers, or you're drawn for no good reason to girls who take their time with every meal. I have my own preferences, of course.

Sometimes in a restaurant I'll catch myself staring at the girl at the table next to mine because I like the shape of her nose.

But no one can insist that his 100% perfect girl correspond to some preconceived type. Much as I like noses, I can't recall the shape of hers -- even if she had one. All I can remember for sure is that she was no great beauty. It's weird.

"Yesterday on the street I pass the 100% perfect girl," I tell someone.

"Yeah?" he says. "Good-looking?"

"Not really."

"Your favorite type, then?"

"I don't know. I can't seem to remember anything about her -- the shape of her eyes or the size of her breasts."


"Yeah. Strange."

"So anyhow," he says, already bored, "what did you do? Talk to her? Follow her?"

"Nah. Just passed her on the street."

She's walking east to west, and I went west to east. It's a really nice April morning.

Wish I could talk to her. Half an hour would be plenty: just ask her about herself, tell her about myself, and -- what I'd really like to do -- explain to her the complexities of fate that have led to our passing each other on a side street in Harajuku on a beautiful April morning in 1981. This was something sure to be crammed full of warm secrets, like an antique clock built when peace filled the world.

After talking, we'd have lunch somewhere, maybe see a Woody Allen movie, stop by a hotel bar for cocktails. With any kind of luck, we might end up in bed.
Potentiality knocks on the door of my heart.

Now the distance between us has narrow to fifteen yards.

How can I approach her? What should I say?

"Good morning, miss. Do you think you could spare half an hour for a little conversation?"

Ridiculous. I'd sound like an insurance salesman.

"Pardon me, but would you happen to know if there is an all-night cleaners in the neighborhood?"

No, this is just ridiculous. I'm not carrying any laundry for one thing. Who's going to buy a line like that?

Maybe the simple truth would do. "Good morning. You're the 100% perfect girl for me."

No, she wouldn't believe it. Or even if she did, she might not want to talk to me.

Sorry, she could say, I might be the 100% perfect girl for you, but you're not the 100% perfect boy for me. It could happen. And if I found myself in that situation, I'd probably go to pieces. I'd never recover from the shock. I'm thirty-two, and that's what growing older is all about.

We pass in front of a flower shop. A small, warm air mass touches my skin.

The asphalt is damp, and I catch the scent of roses. I can't bring myself to speak to her. She wears a white sweater, and in her right hand she holds a crisp white envelope lacking only a stamp. So: She's written somebody a letter, maybe spent the whole night writing, to judge from the sleepy look in her eyes.

The envelope could contain every secret she's every had.

I take a few more strides and turn: She's lost in the crowd.

Now, of course, I know exactly what I should have said to her. It would have been a long speech, though, far too long for me to have delivered properly. The ideas I come up with are never very practical.

Oh well. It would have started "Once upon a time" and ended "A sad story, don't you think?"

Once upon a time, there lived a boy and a girl. The boy was eighteen and the girl sixteen. He was not unusually handsome, and she was not especially beautiful. They were just an ordinary lonely boy and an ordinary lonely girl, like all of the others. But they believed with their whole hearts that somewhere in the world lived the 100% perfect boy and the 100% perfect girl for them. Yes, they believed in a miracle. And that miracle actually happened.

One day the two came upon each other on the corner of the street.

"This is amazing," he said. "I've been looking for you all my life. You may not believe this, but you're the 100% perfect girl for me."

"And you," she said to him, "are the 100% perfect boy for me, exactly as I'd pictured you in every detail. It's like a dream."

They sat on a park bench, held hands, and told each other their stories hour after hour. They were not lonely anymore. They had found and been found by their 100% perfect other. What a wonderful thing it is to find and be found by your 100% perfect other. It's a miracle, a cosmic miracle.

As they sat and talked, however, a tiny, tiny sliver of doubt took root in their hearts: Was it really all right for one's dreams to come true so easily?

And so, when there came a momentary lull in their conversation, the boy said to the girl, "Let's test ourselves -- just once. If we really are each other's 100% perfect lovers, then sometime, somewhere we'll meet again without fail. And when that happens, and we know that we are the 100% perfect ones, we'll marry then and there. What do you think?"

"Yes," she said, "that is exactly what we should do."

And so they parted, she to the east, and he to the west.

The test they had agreed upon, however, was utterly unnecessary. They should never have undertaken it, because they really and truly were each other's 100% perfect lovers, and it was a miracle that they had ever met. But it was impossible for them to know this, young as they were. The cold, indifferent waves of fate proceeded to toss them unmercifully.

One winter, both the boy and the girl came down with the season's terrible influenza, and after drifting for weeks between life and death they lost all memory of their earlier years. When they awoke, their heads were as empty as the young D.H. Lawrence's piggy bank.

They were two bright, determined young people, however, and through their unremitting efforts they were able to acquire once again the knowledge and feeling that qualified them to return as full-fledged members of society. Heaven be praised, they became truly upstanding citizens who knew how to transfer from one subway line to another, they were fully capable of sending a special-delivery letter at the post office. Indeed, they even experienced love again, sometimes as much as 75% or even 85% love.

Time passed with shocking swiftness, and soon the boy was thirty-two, the girl thirty.

One beautiful April morning, in search of a cup of coffee to start the day, the boy was walking from west to east, while the girl, intending to send a special-delivery letter, was walking from east to west, both along the same narrow street in the Harajuku neighborhood of Tokyo. They passed each other in the very center of the street. The faintest gleam of their lost memories glimmered for the briefest moment in their hearts. Each felt a rumbling in the chest. And they knew:

She is the 100% perfect girl for me.

He is the 100% perfect boy for me.

But the glow of their memories was far too weak, and their thoughts no longer had the clarity of fourteen years earlier. Without a word, they passed each other, disappearing into the crowd. Forever.

A sad story, don't you think?

YES, THAT'S IT, that is what I should have said to her.

Date: 2004-06-22 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
someone extraordinary just pointed this story out to me recently.

he was using this quote as his away message... i knew it looked familiar, and i was trying to figure out where it came from, and yours is one of the four sites that comes up (which is weird, considering that there are many that have the story itself - but i've forgotten the mechanisms of google and i'm sure it makes sense somehow, heh).

Date: 2004-06-22 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
how very cool!

Date: 2004-12-01 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
hey, found you through james' journal and i had to comment only because this is one of my favorite short stories (from one of my favorite books of short stories) and we like very similar webcomics.

so i guess i just wanted to say, you have good taste! heh.

Date: 2004-12-03 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I went to your journal - we actually met that night at the huge house that Chris was housesitting. We bowled! That was me!

Hahaha anyway. I am a huge webcomics nerd. And a huge nerd to boot. Someone sent me that story - what collection is it in?

Date: 2005-02-07 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
hey sorry it took me so long to reply, i kept forgetting what your lj was called...

its in a collection of stories called "the elephant vanishes" its amazing!

Date: 2007-02-01 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Hi, i found you by way of [ profile] piedpiper's journal and then read this wonderful story you posted. now i want to read more of his stories and more of yours too, i think - so I added you! whatdoyasay?

Date: 2007-02-02 12:56 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-06-13 02:17 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I must procure a bookie by this man. Despite my semi-hostile attitude to love stories in general, this managed to soften me up a bit. I can't remember how many times I've yearned for but one meaningful word to say to those insta-soulmates I bump into from time to time... but I've never had the courage to try. I'll try to let this story resonate for me the next time I consider averting my eyes!


Date: 2008-02-06 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
2:42 am thought - I really like this story!

Date: 2008-02-06 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Murakami is the bessssssssst! I added you, btw.

Date: 2008-02-07 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Haha, thank you! I shall reciprocate in kind. Though I warn you... I am really bad at updating. And tend to only do it when I feel a need to rant.


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